2013年英語二大作文解析:語句精彩者得高分_跨考網(wǎng)

　　1月5日下午，考研英語考試如期進行，寫作Part B部分，可能是考生和各位輔導(dǎo)老師討論最熱烈的部分。英語(二)的圖畫寫作，較往年試題相比簡單了很多，這種作文似乎更像是四六級話題作文，所以同學(xué)們寫起來肯定有話可說，甚至是腦子里有很多相關(guān)的資料，可以信手拈來，只不過做個對比，看哪個句子結(jié)構(gòu)更兩點更精彩就選擇哪句話。

　　跨考教育英語教研組董瑞敏老師認(rèn)為，大家也要謹(jǐn)慎一些如果只是機械性的將四、六級腦海中殘存的一些內(nèi)容搬過來，也只能得到一半左右的分?jǐn)?shù)。要注意審題，題目中圖片的大概意思是：大學(xué)生從大一到大三從事兼職的人數(shù)呈現(xiàn)緩慢增長的趨勢，而大四階段卻急速增長。第二段應(yīng)該透過現(xiàn)象解釋原因，至少分兩方面：第一，為何大一到大三從事兼職的人數(shù)緩慢增長;第二，為何大四從事兼職學(xué)生的數(shù)量激增。最后一段分析這種現(xiàn)象是否符合客觀規(guī)律。

　　范文：In the bar chart, it shows the changes of the proportion of thestudents having part-time jobs during the four years’ study in college. Theproportion increases slightly from the first year to the third year, however,the fourth year has witnessed a fast increase, surging to 88.24%。

　　There is no denying that this trend is verypervasive in current colleges and in a certain degree is quite proper. To beginwith, when students in their first year in college, their major job is tostudy, not to work. They have to lay a profound knowledge base so that theymake a good preparation for future work. What’s more, when students are goingto step out of school and enter into the society, they have to know lots ofexperience , for example, how to deal with challenges outside, so they need tohave some part-time jobs. Clearly, doing a part time job has many advantages. Studentscan learn how to get along well with others and know the society moreprofoundly. Secondly, to take a part-time job provides the students with avaluable opportunity to put what he has learned from books into practice.Finally, students can make some money, which helps to unload theirfamilies’financial burden。

　　Due to the analysis above, to be an eligible heir of socialismconstruction, you have to strike a balance between your study and the job.Study is your major task while a part time job is a minor one though workexperience is desirable。

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