2011年考研真題英語(yǔ)(一)作文解析_跨考網(wǎng)

　　Section III Writing

　　51.小作文

　　小作文范文：

　　Dear friend,

　　I am writing, without hesitation, to share one of my favorite movies, Forest Gump, with you, which is not only conducive to your study, but also beneficial to your life.

　　For one thing, the beautiful language in this original English movie may contribute to your study of English in listening, speaking, reading and writing. For another thing, the profound cultural elements implicit in the scene will equip you with foreign cultural background and, above all, enrich your daily life.

　　Would you like to see this movie after my recommendation? Remember to tell me your opinion about the movie. I am looking forward to your early reply.

　　Yours,

　　Li Ming

　　審題謀篇

　　11年應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作考查的是推薦信。推薦信是向收信人推薦某人做某事的信件。

　　本次的推薦信是推薦給好友一部電影，并說(shuō)明喜歡這部電影的原因。題目中給出的信息包括：寫(xiě)信的對(duì)象(a friend)，寫(xiě)信的目的(recommend one of your favorite movies)，信的主體內(nèi)容(reasons for your recommendation)。需要注意的是主體部分至少包括兩方面的原因。

　　文章從布局上可以分為三段展開(kāi)。第一段，直接點(diǎn)明主題，開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山地說(shuō)出寫(xiě)信意圖，可以籠統(tǒng)地向朋友推薦你喜歡的電影。第二段則要發(fā)揮想象力，從2~3個(gè)方面點(diǎn)出你之所以推薦這部電影的原因。在寫(xiě)第二段時(shí)，一定要打開(kāi)思路，可寫(xiě)的素材多種多樣，如籠統(tǒng)地說(shuō)明該電影語(yǔ)言?xún)?yōu)美，有助于英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí);同時(shí)電影中隱含的文化要素能夠豐富我們的日常生活。第三段，再次推薦，并盼望回復(fù)。

　　從語(yǔ)域角度講，這是一篇給親密朋友的推薦信，因此用詞可較為隨和，但語(yǔ)氣要真摯，以達(dá)到和朋友溝通和交流的作用。

　　作文的評(píng)分要點(diǎn)包括：1)題目所給的信息點(diǎn)的全面性;2)內(nèi)容組織的條理性和語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性;3)根據(jù)交際對(duì)象采用的話(huà)語(yǔ)方式，如正式、一般、非正式的話(huà)語(yǔ)等。這封信是寫(xiě)給朋友的，談?wù)摰氖峭扑]自己喜歡的電影，因此語(yǔ)氣較非正式，隨和且真摯;4)標(biāo)點(diǎn)、拼寫(xiě)和書(shū)寫(xiě)格式要正確，如果影響交際，產(chǎn)生歧義或令人費(fèi)解，分?jǐn)?shù)將降低一個(gè)檔次。

　　寫(xiě)作技巧

　　清晰的三段式層次，合情合理，語(yǔ)言要直接，態(tài)度真誠(chéng)，語(yǔ)氣隨和。

　　第一段，點(diǎn)明寫(xiě)信的目的是推薦電影。信函開(kāi)頭的可套用句型為：

　　I am writing to you to recommend … for …

　　I take great pleasure in recommending to you … as …

　　I would like to present … for your consideration in …

　　With reference to your requirements, I shall, without reservation, recommend … as….

　　第二段，簡(jiǎn)要概括推薦該電影的原因。

　　On the one hand,…On the other hand,…從兩個(gè)角度提出……;

　　第三段，再次建議，并盼望回復(fù)?？商子镁湫停?/p>

　　I am convinced that you are willing to see this movie after my enthusiastic recommendation.

　　Your prompt attention on my recommendations will be highly appreciated.

　　52.大作文

　　大作文范文：

　　The terrible scene depicted in the cartoon shows that some people in our life still lack the awareness of environmental protection. The picture illustrates that two tourists are chatting and eating happily on a boat and casually throwing their rubbish into the lake which is full of litter and waste. The drawing sets us thinking too much due to its far-reaching influence.

　　Nowadays, though the awareness of protecting environment is being accepted by more and more people, we can still see many unpleasant scenes especially in scenic spots. Why does this phenomenon arise? Many factors are accounting for it. First and foremost, to some people, the consciousness of protecting environment is still not so strong. They may not think it is a big deal to throw rubbish everywhere. In addition, the environmental management system isn’t so satisfying. For example, in some places there’re few regulations or the implementation is seldom performed actually.

　　From what has been discussed above, it is urgent to take some effective and relative measures. In the first place, we should continue to conduct more propaganda in communities and schools so as to let people realize the importance of protecting environment. In the second, more rules should be made and carried out by the government to restrain the conduction of destroying environment. People should work together to create clean and beautiful surroundings.

　　審題謀篇

　　本次大作文話(huà)題為大家一直計(jì)較關(guān)注的環(huán)保問(wèn)題。環(huán)境話(huà)題在1991年、1999年以及2000年都曾經(jīng)考過(guò)，所以對(duì)各位考生來(lái)講并不陌生。而且2010年考查的“文化”與2002年考查的話(huà)題一致，因此，話(huà)題復(fù)現(xiàn)是很自然的。這同時(shí)也告訴未來(lái)考生復(fù)習(xí)往年話(huà)題的重要性。

　　文章采取總分總結(jié)構(gòu)。第一段描述圖畫(huà)，描述的內(nèi)容一定要與主題相關(guān)。第一句可以總寫(xiě)圖畫(huà)，也可以先點(diǎn)明文章觀點(diǎn)。接著，第二/三句具體描寫(xiě)圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容。最后一句再次點(diǎn)題。第二段揭示產(chǎn)生問(wèn)題的原因?？梢粤信e2-3個(gè)理由?；蛘邔?xiě)此問(wèn)題可能導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果。最后一段提出解決問(wèn)題的方案或者措施。

　　寫(xiě)作技巧

　　The terrible scene depicted in the cartoon shows that…

　　The drawing sets us thinking too much due to …

　　Many factors are accounting for …