2013網(wǎng)校經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)精英保過同學(xué)英語作文批改_跨考網(wǎng)

　　學(xué)員作文：

　　Dear Mr. Wang,

　　I am writing for quiting my position as an editor in your magine Design&Fashines.The reason as follow .

　 　Firstly, I find this job beyond my ability to copy with . Everyday, I must go to different department to deal with the relationships of each clerk and there are mountain works to be done. Secondly, I find there are not so much time that I can live with my family , because I always work in the midnight. Last but no least ,the salary below my inagine , so it is not enough to me to offer my rents.

　　I would appreciate it if you are so kind as to give me a reply at your earliest convenience.

　　Yours sincerely

　　老師批改：

　　老師評語：

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