2014考研英語(yǔ)小作文批改例文：感謝信（二）_跨考網(wǎng)

　　0-4分》》考研英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)指導(dǎo)

　　第一篇

　　Dear Elle，

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you gave me help at the school party last Sunday. If it had not been for your assistance in you lend me your beautiful dress, I fear that I would have been appearing in once a year campus dancing party.

　　Everyone agrees that it was you who generously offered dress to me. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　Dear Elle，

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you gave me help(for 后面不能加句子，可改為your help) at the school party last Sunday. If it had not been for your assistance in you lend(改為 lending) me your beautiful dress, I fear that I would (加 not)have been appearing (appeared)in(改為at) once a year (可以用一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句來(lái)修飾，此處刪掉)campus dancing party(加上 ,which is held only once every year ).

　　Every one agrees that it was you who generously offered(加the ) dress to me. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　2分

　　同學(xué)你好，第一段的最后一句話(huà)中，由于沒(méi)有寫(xiě)not,使文章的意思完全相反，因此，一定要好好研究一下虛擬語(yǔ)氣的用法。另外，for 后面是不能加句子的。

　　第二篇

　　Dear Bob，

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you to help me to improve my English during these days. If it had not been for your assistance in teaching me various knowledge including the culture of English, Then help me to practice English face to face, I fear that I would have been seek to the way of learning English for a long time without your help.

　　Everyone agrees that it was you who are warmly and likely to help others without the pay. Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Dear Bob，

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you to help me to improve my English during these days. If it had not been for your assistance in teaching me various knowledge including the culture of English, Then(刪除) help(改為helping) me to practice English face to face, I fear that I would have been seek(改為seeking) to the way of learning English for a long time without your help.(刪除)

　　Every one agrees that it was you who are warmly and likely(likely 是很可能的意思)to help others without the pay(it was …who..是強(qiáng)調(diào)句，此句可以改為，it was you who are so warmly to help others for free). Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　4分

　　同學(xué)你好，寫(xiě)完書(shū)信要有yours sincerely 和 你的名字。英語(yǔ)的句號(hào)是.此外，建議你看一下關(guān)于強(qiáng)調(diào)句和虛擬語(yǔ)氣的知識(shí)。