跨考名師評(píng)析2011考研英語(yǔ)（一）小作文

跨考名師評(píng)析2011考研英語(yǔ)（一）小作文

【題目】
Directions:
Write a letter to a friend of yours to
1) recommend one of your favorite movies and
2) give reasons for your recommendation.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write the address. (10points)
【評(píng)析】
        今年考研的這篇小作文考查的是大家最為熟悉的書(shū)信形式。由于各位考生在復(fù)習(xí)備考過(guò)程中一直將書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作練習(xí)作為小作文備考的重點(diǎn)，而且大家對(duì)“電影”這個(gè)話題一般也有話可寫(xiě)，因此整體難度不高。
        除了書(shū)信的格式要注意以外，題目提示中給出了兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)：一是推薦電影，二是給出理由。
        書(shū)信的開(kāi)頭采用標(biāo)準(zhǔn)格式，正文首段可以直奔主題。如果寒暄最好不要超過(guò)一句。第二段可以首先簡(jiǎn)介一下電影的故事梗概，一兩句即可，要注意連貫。然后講出電影的特色。一般來(lái)說(shuō)好電影的特點(diǎn)無(wú)非就是故事精彩、特效驚人、手法獨(dú)特、配樂(lè)優(yōu)美等，點(diǎn)出其中一兩個(gè)特色即可。結(jié)束段可以再次強(qiáng)調(diào)自己的推薦，并提出自己的希望，比如希望對(duì)方喜歡，或者希望跟對(duì)方作進(jìn)一步討論等。最后在正確的位置寫(xiě)上Yours并署Li Ming，小作文寫(xiě)作結(jié)束。
        考研英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作要求目的明確，要點(diǎn)完備，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語(yǔ)言流暢。小作文中，可以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，如果能在此基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行一些并列和復(fù)合來(lái)增加語(yǔ)言的多樣性則更佳。
【范文】
Dear Liu Lei,
         I’m writing to tell you about a fantastic movie I have just watched, as we always share the same taste of movies.
        The movie is Avatar, which tells a story of a soldier who, on an alien planet filled with exotic life forms, finds himself torn between two worlds in a fight for the survival of the alien people. Besides the touching and thrilling story, the movie also features brilliant visual effects, thanks to the talented director and advanced computer technology.
        So I recommend it to you as one of the best movies I have ever watched. I’m sure you will love it as much as I do. I’m looking forward to discussing more with you after you watch it.

                                                                                              Yours,
                                                                                                              Li Ming